Mid-August
we all huddled around a small wooden coffee table fanaticized by a simple card game, for hours
we played; shocked that the oldest
cousin, Annie would win every time. War, BS, spoons you name it and we played,
at the time I had no idea what BS meant but still managed to win on occasion.
That day was my mother’s birthday after our card marathon we decided we wanted
to bake a cake, we put everything and anything we could find into a bowl put
the oven to three fifty and let it bake for a couple of hours. After the first use of the ancient fire
extinguisher we decided to try to make sand pies instead. Packing infinite
grains into red solo cups singing whatever Fergie song was hot at the time and
believing that the day would never end. We sang, danced and chanted meaning less sayings that will be forever
etched into my brain. As the sun went down we all retreated back to the beach
house to eat and continue to reenact the movie Grease. We were happy every last
one of us. Even though it’s been about ten years, we still play Uno till three
in the morning, dance to Fergie and sing at the top of our lungs.

The innocence of this memory, especially not knowing what BS meant, really comes out in your post. It almost feels like nothing has changed from then to now, from what I can see, because even though your lives have changed you guys still manage to bond. <3 On that note... TTTTASTY TASTY.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Short and sweet. I think it would be interesting to connect this memory to who you are today (which I kind of think you did with the last sentence). It does not even have to be something deep or cheesy but maybe what the memory means to you.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Short and sweet. I think it would be interesting to connect this memory to who you are today (which I kind of think you did with the last sentence). It does not even have to be something deep or cheesy but maybe what the memory means to you.
ReplyDeleteI love this simplicity of this; you definitely have a voice in your writing that comes out in your little snips of humor. I think maybe you could look at some of the longer sentences because sometimes they seem to run on for a bit. Reorganizing the sentences may make the piece come across more effectively.TTTTTTASTY TASTY!!!
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